Hey guys,
I've checked some of my comments and on of them coming from my darling says i should try something more happy. Well here goes, ill give it a shot. Here is a poem dedicated to my dearest!
The Day We Met
The days go by slowly before i met you,
every second, every minute, every hour,
before your coming,
seemed like eternity multiplied by two
it has been a year and more,
since that fateful day,
the day of your birth
and the birth of our meant to be
as i ponder on things pass
no memory could be as close to bliss as the memory of you and me
our beliefs and thoughts may sometimes differ
but believe what we believe
we still share the belief of 'us' you see
so as the years pass, we may seem a little bit colder
argue as we may, each other we still cherish
but know this and know it well as clear as day i can tell
that everyday our love always gets just a little bit bolder
till the day we part, love shall ever be
you and me
-shane-
A poem about The Meeting and The Coming Together.
Dedicated to you
The Love of My Life
7 comments:
Hmm, Shivani, perhaps you shld "balas" Daniel's poem!
I'll give you the starting point.
As I gaze upon the sky
To find a bright star
I find none,
However,
You shine beside me.
Then go on and on... hahaha!!
shine on,
bright as a star on nova
a nova that shines ever eternal
without having to burn out
stagnant in the brightest state
as love erupts from all over
the lone nova star...
now you go on lol
Shivani i mean haha,
thanks Sam
alright, to all, this is my poem to "balas" back dan. thanks for the help though =P
As I gaze upon the sky
To find a bright star
I find none,
However,
You shine beside me.
shine on, shine on
bright as a star on nova
a nova that shines ever eternal
without having to burn out
stagnant in the brightest state
as love erupts from all over
the lone nova star...
however,as love fell all around,
this nova could find no other,
that could match to her imperfectness,
nor to her completion.
Alone she might have been,
if it wasnt for this star
who didnt see her as a black hole
nor considered her as an avatar
and now this star wants to say she was lucky,
for finding eternal love,
for though the timing may seem short
but their love will remain endless.
there u go =P
beat that ;P
love u b =)
Hahha, where is ur new post Dan!! keep it coming, even Traveler has started traveling!
Helo dan! kit here. Read your poem while working on my daily journal at the office. Now I'm all gluey for marianne's passionate lips now. No thanks to you.
I got something cheesy just for you too -
Your pie is cut into half and I'll gladly eat the other half for you (wink)
ehem ehem (:
i like this blogpost, as you expressed yourself deeply (:
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